More Refined Plan

On the desk is a computer and phone, and it fades the sound in with the phone ringing. It then keeps showing shots of the room until the phone goes to the answering machine, there Daniel’s friend will be saying things like “Daniel! Stop putting these claims on your blog! You are basically leading these murderers to you. What the hell are you trying to do? How did you even come up with these suspects? They’re going to kill you, you know?” ect. Whilst this takes place, the shots will be of the computer monitor, showing zoomed in areas of this blog Daniel has been writing. Panning along sentences such as ‘I finally figured it out, the killer is’ and pictures of suspects. This will then go into the scene of the killer coming into the house which was described in the pitch.